Tuesday, May 10, 2011

urs sincerely!!!!

Sabotage my emancipation
The minerals taste bitter again,
Habits of perfection fell apart,
Like swards of soil in the rain,

Worthless wounds and unheard sounds,
Tinkle the bells of neverland,
Threatening me to shower again,
With age-old golden sands,

Blue they make me today,
With fears of revisiting our graves,
Blue they made me then
too; with weak submission I still crave,

Your pace browbeat mine,
Curling feathers, sweeping shacks,
I still vye in vain for,
the graceful grandeur all so lack,

Ancient runes left undeciphered,
My present, an anagram of past,
I tried too, being anarchious,
But then your stare swings so fast....

4 comments:

  1. Can u possibly explain the meaning in brief?Some of us has possibly slow or no poetic decipherence...plz.

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  2. explain in brief...oxymoronic request
    but actually i m thinking of starting a new page titled "BHAAVARTHA"....Wat say?!

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  3. Wow u come up with spellbounding words and i have to often look up in the dictionary!!.And u can start the bhaavartha page but i meant to explain the msg. in the poem in a short and crisp way so that we can at least take back something home.some of us are terrible at poetry.i hope u understand..
    And probably start words (3-4)of the day on your blog so that we can benefit from it..

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